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4th November 2012, 08:38 PM
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Deep in thought
A guy lost in his thoughts in a back alley in Deira, Dubai
2/35 Distagon @ f3.2
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4th November 2012, 08:58 PM
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Re: Deep in thought
I like the black & white, but there's too much going on this image to make me think "deep in thought"...The door has no relevance to the image and I kind of want to see what's on the opposite side of the guy. So a shot without the door and further to the left. Here, he just looks posed. But it's not bad.
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4th November 2012, 09:04 PM
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Re: Deep in thought
Its good phil, but a little busier than a lot of the other stuff you post, i think it lacks the central impact that you normally achieve.
The motorbike spoils it for me as well.
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5th November 2012, 12:35 PM
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Re: Deep in thought
I'm loving the textures but I think I would prefer it in portrait format including the left half of the frame as the brightness of the door and wall details beyond are stealing my eye away.
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