Could you provide more background on what you wanted to achieve with this photo?
I love close-ups of insects, it's cool! The only thing with this photo for me is that it is underexposed and flat in contrast and saturation. I'm not sure what the main subject is, the bees or the spider, or the flower? For me, the grain is a little distracting too. But, this is a great start!
Actually, I was trying to get the bee on the right site in focus, but there was a slight breeze, and the bee started to move just when I clicked.
I didn't even see the spider until I opened the picture on my computer.
In reality, the flower was overexposed -guess I got carried away in PP. I shouldn't have darkened the background so much