First shoot in Natural Light w/ flash, any critiques welcome.

[LeoLeo]

Mitch,

I like it. I will use "however" instead of "but", to tell you that particular framming was not "perfect" either "really bad", there are some blemishes and tonal range is a bit odd.

Colin post cover all technical aspects, and not only. The question is: can I/should I "rework" somebody's work ?, but this should be a separate thread.

"Sometimes a picture worth more than 1000 words", and, sometimes is easyer to show a picture to explain your concept.

How far this should go? : it depends. Both photograph and model, candid or profesional, or in between. Shall I mention "Artistic Director" / "Senior editor" / "Photographic Director".... ?

Good work Mitch, overall.

Leo

[Toothtek]

Colin,

Sorry I took so long to reply to you, I moved this weekend and just reaquired internet, I would love to see what you do altho I did not shoot this in RAW it was large jpeg. If you can work with that I can send it to you.

Mitch

[Colin Southern]

Colin,

Sorry I took so long to reply to you, I moved this weekend and just reaquired internet, I would love to see what you do altho I did not shoot this in RAW it was large jpeg. If you can work with that I can send it to you.

Mitch

Hi Mitch,

Lets give it a go!