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13th December 2012, 10:16 AM
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Unknown
Unknown - Is there ever really a known?
A quick shot while waiting to start the work day. Gladly open to all C+C.
Last edited by HiImTom; 13th December 2012 at 10:29 AM.
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13th December 2012, 11:05 PM
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Re: Unknown
Hi Tom,
Maybe a little underexposed? i just thought that maybe this would be a good entry for the expendeble competition.
Andrew
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13th December 2012, 11:24 PM
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Re: Unknown
It is funny how I felt absolutely zero emotion about this image, thanks for the feedback.
Last edited by HiImTom; 14th December 2012 at 11:58 AM.
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14th December 2012, 11:52 AM
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Re: Unknown
Tom - You might find it helpful (or others will find it helpful) if you were to post images at a larger size. This one is 400 pixels on the longer edge. It will help people comment if they are able to see it at a better size.
For portrait orientation images, posting at up to 1000 pixels on the longer edge will allow people to click on the linked image and view it at a good size in the Lightbox.
On this particular image, I wasn't sure what it was you were trying to convey. It looked ot me like the edge of a door frame, or some sort of structure, but I wasn't sure whether you were trying to make an image about tone, or shape, or structure etc.
In order to attract best feedback, you could have a read of this thread. It gives you some helpful advice and guidance about how to get the best feedback from fellow members.
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14th December 2012, 12:14 PM
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Re: Unknown
Thanks David for the link.
I went ahead and attached a larger sized image, I was still trying to figure out a better way to get this done. I finally found a good solution on my end.
I was attempting to show the contrast between the black roof and white trim. I found the frost on the metal roof to be interesting in addition to the contrast. I was attempting to have the composition be a focus area as well as the contrast. I struggled to find a mood in any of those subjects, hence, probably why I don't really like it or feel much emotion about it.
I feel like I am struggling with my composition, any suggestions or feedback would be appreciated.
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14th December 2012, 12:15 PM
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Re: Unknown
Thanks David for the link.
I went ahead and attached a larger sized image, I was still trying to figure out a better way to get this done. I finally found a good solution on my end.
I was attempting to show the contrast between the black roof and white trim. I found the frost on the metal roof to be interesting in addition to the contrast. I was attempting to have the composition be a focus area as well as the contrast. I struggled to find a mood in any of those subjects, hence, probably why I don't really like it or feel much emotion about it.
I feel like I am struggling with my composition, any suggestions or feedback would be appreciated.
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