Maddening?

[Ryogenetic]

Having some fun with my new to me lens, I am not sure I got this shot right, but its close. (Blinds at my screen door)



Any thoughts? C&C welcome.

Thanks
Ryo

[Donald]

Ryo - Right down at the bottom left and at the bottom right, there are thin slivers of light showing (click on it to look at it in the lightbox). I think they are quite distracting so would want to bring the crop in just that very tiny bit on both sides.

Apart from that ..................! I like the tonal range that goes across the image. It provides clear points of interest and it just not a photo of blinds, but about light on blinds. Good one.

[Ryogenetic]

So more like so:



Donald thanks for the insight and brilliant summary of what I was trying to capture!

Here are some more random shots with the Oly 28mm:





and the obligatory lens shot:



I really like the weight of this lens in my hand it just feels solid!

Thanks
Ryo