All work fine, George.
Crowds are usually just an annoyance for photographers but you have managed to nicely include them in the first two images.
All work fine, George.
Crowds are usually just an annoyance for photographers but you have managed to nicely include them in the first two images.
Here's as series of the donjon (keep) at the Chateau de Vincennes which was built in the 14 century. It has an interesting history including the place where the English King Henry 5 died. It was a heavy overcast day so I think the original is a bit flat. The first is out of the box, the rest are attempts at enhancing it with LR4. Appreciate your C&C and suggestions.
George
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2 Cropped, sharpened.
3 Sky with the exposure lowered
4 Sepia and vignette
With that scene, George, I wonder if you could get away with a selection/mask and actually change the sky.
#3 has a better sky but I wonder if the image might take a fraction more highlight brightness; possibly selectively applied, mostly to the castle. Or a little LCE. Also, there is a little bit of a smudge on the bell assembly when viewed at full size.
And would B&W look better than sepia?
The basic shot is clean and clear enough to take a little more experimental tweaking.
Thanks for the feedback Geoff. I took this pic as a challenge to see what I can do with it. I'll follow up with your suggestion to mask and change the sky. Up until now I have just be using LR4 which doesn't do masking/layering so i picked up PSE11. Now I need to learn how to use it. Once I figure it out I'll upload a version with clouds. Here it looks in B&W.
As an example, I had a quick play around with a similar scene here
Day out of the office
And we discussed similar methods in this post.
Gaussian Blur in Photoshop Elements 9
Don't worry if you initially make a mess of this sort of thing; just regard it as a bit of fun and you will gradually gain in experience.
And once you become proficient in using layers and masks etc you will wonder how you managed without them.
Last edited by Geoff F; 13th April 2013 at 09:49 PM. Reason: links added
Start with the CinC tutorials to give a good basic grounding in most subjects then try here
http://ronbigelow.com/articles/selec...lections-1.htm
That is the Selections/Masks tutorial in 5 volumes but there is a lot of other information on the site. It does tend to quickly get involved and complicated though. But eventually worth the struggle.
Some parts were written for earlier software but the basics are mostly identical to the latest Elements versions.
Yes, a dramatic shot--quite a change in appearance from the original version. I'm undecided whether the bright edge on some of the clouds detracts from the architecture but overall I think it works well.
That is the right idea, George. Well done.
Possibly the cloud highlights are a bit bright; but I can't be sure on this monitor.
But what about the flagpole? A tricky job to retain it and it didn't really add anything important.
Thanks Bruce and Geoff,
I agree that the cloud is too bright, especially on the right side. I did quick search through my pics for clouds and found this one.
I tried to get the flagpole but it wasn't easy so gave up for now. I need more practice with PSE11. Since LR5 beta has come out I'm going to switch gears a see what it has and will probably come back to this pic in the future.
Lovely photos George.. Although I don't always comment I very much enjoy viewing all your photos.
An interesting study in horizontal lines. Was your train moving when you took the photo?
I like the photo for the composition, sense of movement and the lines (even though the lines include power lines)..
Thanks Bruce, Christina.
Glad you like it.
My train was moving. The one you see was parked. When I saw the original I thought it was a throw away since there was lot of reflection on the window from the light inside my train. I cut about half of it away. Then the more I looked at it the more I liked the sense of repetition in the different parts of the image.