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17th January 2013, 09:05 PM
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Just a snow pic, C+c welcome
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17th January 2013, 09:15 PM
#2
Re: Just a snow pic, C+c welcome
Cool shot. Red on b/w looks goodl.
The blue figure on the right seems a bit distracting and pulling attention perhaps crop her out?
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17th January 2013, 09:15 PM
#3
Re: Just a snow pic, C+c welcome
It's a good one!
I like view and perspective. In my humble opinion, there are 3 points to be fixed:
- it seems to me that it is leaning to the left: straight up the buildings
- the colours are good, but perhaps the red is too saturated (did you used a Canon?)
- perhaps framing a bit lower and more to the left would add the perspective of the road line and would help you to avoid the half-flag at the top right: it's a bit distracting. Why not a square crop?
hope this helps,
cheers
Nicola
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17th January 2013, 09:31 PM
#4
Re: Just a snow pic, C+c welcome
Nice shot , Mike
Even if a tad over-saturated, it works for me. I do think a crop of the right is a good idea- the blue coat and the grey building detract more than add, I think. The 1:1 ratio Nicola suggested might just be the ticket.
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17th January 2013, 09:42 PM
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Re: Just a snow pic, C+c welcome
Camera is sony, this better?
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17th January 2013, 09:48 PM
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Re: Just a snow pic, C+c welcome
That looks much better. Nice job!!
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17th January 2013, 09:50 PM
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Re: Just a snow pic, C+c welcome
Works for me! Great color contrast, strong converging lines. I feel like I'm on my bike heading right dow that street. What kind of Sony? and where you from?
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17th January 2013, 09:58 PM
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Re: Just a snow pic, C+c welcome
Now it is really good. Well done.
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17th January 2013, 10:06 PM
#9
Re: Just a snow pic, C+c welcome
Thank you guys, Sony A99, Minolta lens 35-70
Picture is taken in Amsterdam Holland.
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17th January 2013, 10:08 PM
#10
Re: Just a snow pic, C+c welcome
Wow! Heaps better, Mike. It's amazing how the right crop can completely change a picture.
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17th January 2013, 10:33 PM
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Re: Just a snow pic, C+c welcome
Right, I'm amazed also, nice thing here is the response and how you can do things differently, by cutting or editing a bit.
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18th January 2013, 01:29 AM
#12
Re: Just a snow pic, C+c welcome
Stunning. and the square crop was completion.
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18th January 2013, 01:35 AM
#13
Re: Just a snow pic, C+c welcome
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18th January 2013, 07:18 AM
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Re: Just a snow pic, C+c welcome
I like the wiggly lines of the bicycles' tracks. It's obvious they had to go slowly and carefully. Trying to read the inverted word on the flag also provided some entertainment. (I thought I was being a good sleuth until I saw the answer in post #9 of this thread.)
The bright red is fine for me; I like its contrast with the rest of the scene.
Tony
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