Does it look ok? Wasn't sure and wanted to see many opinions.
PLEASE let me know what you think! Thanks<3
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Thread: The Old Tree
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25th January 2013, 03:48 PM #1
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The Old Tree
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25th January 2013, 05:50 PM #2
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Re: The Old Tree
Sambam, just an opinion - if the aim is to show the age of the tree, and it is obviously a big structure, perhaps we need to see more of its lower trunk together with the textures of its bark, rather than a silhouette.
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25th January 2013, 07:42 PM #3
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Re: The Old Tree
Also, the focus seems rather shallow, so there is a mix of sharp focus and blurred areas amongst the leaves. So it ends up looking a bit of a mess.
The idea is good, but I suspect a reshoot with different settings and with a selection of camera angles is the best option.
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