The expressions are good.
Could you get away with cropping a little closer by using a different size ratio; maybe 5 x 4 ratio? Or would that seem too tight?
Geof, thanks for viewing and comments.
Nice pictures and you are rhight about the lovely expressions.
Main point for me is that the entire image appears out of focus? Was this intended unless, my eyes are playing tricks. I mean, I do have a head ache at this precise moment.
Maybe this was indeed intended.
Out of interest, where was your point of focus?
Regards.
Nigel, thanks for viewing.Actually several pp trics were done on this image to give a feel of dream like qualities. Original photo was tack sharp. Subjects view towards out of the frame is intended to make the viewer curious! I think you have got your answer. I donot know whether overal feel of the image is good or not? There lies the importance of your opinion.