Originally Posted by
Geoff F
Basically good, Darren; particularly considering the shooting conditions.
Is #1 a fraction high in the green channel? But that could be my monitor. The flash is slightly strong on his right shoulder and background. Not a significant problem though. And virtually impossible to get this sort of shot absolutely perfect. You have caught the moment nicely.
#2 has a few slight problems with background lights which I would try to reduce. Possibly even try cropping tighter with a different size ratio to remove the right side background light.
#3. She is leaning to one side. Some people like this sort of effect while others prefer portraits to be more upright. Not a real issue for me though. Maybe you could get away with just a slight boost to the highlights, preferably applied selectively to avoid the background lights.