With spring's arrival, the Detroit Fire Collective has moved their practices outdoors, which provides much cleaner backgrounds (apart from irritating retro-reflective lenses on parked cars behind the performers ). I had a pretty good day at last Monday's practice, but I have a few questions about some of my results. I think the technical side is going rather well, but I feel like I should be able to get more... something... out of these images in PP. As always, critique and commentary on any aspect of my processing is welcome.
On both of these shots, I pump the saturation to about +25, then bring down the white temperature (shot on manual WB at 3400K, pulled down to 2800K) to give the fire more color without ruining skin tones. I try to leave it a little warm so it looks like performers are lit by their torches.
Canon 60D, 20mm lens with polarizer (a cheapskate's 2-stop ND ) at f11, 1.0sec exposure, ISO100.
I tried cloning out the ghosting around her face, but didn't have much luck. It's hard to maintain the shape of the face when you're drawing around its border. Any tips on that front? Is it just a matter of getting the brush settings dead right to maintain a natural-looking edge? This image also had some stray lights and background elements cloned out. Is the solid-black background good, or would you rather see something?
Canon 60D, 11-16mm lens at 12mm and f9.0, 0.8sec exposure, ISO100.
Of these two, I like this better. I cropped out some electrical hardware on the arch behind her, and part of the area under her feet. Here, I think the I-beam arch adds enough that the black background is no problem at all. PP used the same saturation/white balance technique described above, and the sharpening seemed to work better here (probably because the image is sharper to begin with ). I also applied a little planar distortion to increase her perceived height (similar effect could have been achieved by getting my lens closer to the ground).
Any PP suggestions to get more out of my raw materials? I feel like my photos are really close to doing these guys justice, but I can't see the way forward. Fire away, ladies & gentlemen!