Last edited by ConstellationX; 9th May 2013 at 11:35 PM.
A good set of shots - I particularly like the relaxed happy expressions in the B&W. The last shot due to the lighting and flare has suffered a bit too much in contrast and saturation.
An averall very good set, #2 and #3 are really excellent!
Just few thoughts:
I think you should be a bit more carefull when framing and avoid cutting ears.
In #1 the eyes color is a bit exaggerated + cut ears
#2 for me a bit wider or narrower frame,
#3 I don't like the placement of your signature,
#4 the frare is not that pleasing but the softeness is + part of a ballon missing.
Actually for #2 and #3 they are just minor problems for me, I really love your photos.
Thank you!
I wanted to pull out further on the head shots, but I only had a small stepping stool. I learned my lesson, though, and will now bring a ladder for those shots.
I was also disappointed to have cut off the balloon. But I loved the pop of color it brought to our pre-spring session.
A pity about the exposure problems in the last image, Cat, that could have been an excellent photo with good composition, even with a 'cropped balloon'.
It may be worth playing around with some editing to increase the shadows and saturation a little.