
Originally Posted by
AB26
Hi Manfred,
The bridge is splitting the image in two halves, an upper half and a lower half.
Moving closer to the entrance to the bridge and having the bridge lead the eye of the viewer into the right hand third of the image towards the village on the other side with the river flowing “out” of the image on the far right would probably have been a beter composition.
You would like the viewer to have an idea of the length of the bridge by having the leading lines narrow down much more towards the exit of the bridge on the other side.
Again, a very good B&W conversion.