Please comment and critique - new member

[Dakota]

Here are some night shots of a local hotel and one composite featuring a classic car. I would greatly appreciate any comments and critiques.] Hope I did this right! , , ,

[pnodrog]

Pretty good set of picture to introduce yourself (name on your profile would nice). No big technical problems for us to help you with - if there were you would have had heaps of comments by now.

I prefer the second shot but a fraction more shadow detail may make it even better. The lighting in the first shot is great but you could see how it looks with some of the grass at the bottom cropped out.

The red car I think would look fantastic if you made the road really dark and cloned out the white lines. The back and particularly the front of the car are to tightly framed and could do with a bit more room.

[Dakota]

Thank You L.Paul for taking the time to look at my work, I see exactly what your saying. I hadn't even thought of those things during editing. My real Name is Tim. I've updated my profile. I'm a bit of a technical knuckle-head so you'll have pardon me. I'll catch on sooner or later.