I am always interested in looking at your images. I like them very much and really respect the "way" you see things and the post processing you do to make each image "yours"!
I would think so! I also like all the different lines.
The halos or whatever they are look fine throughout most of the photo because they are part of the style on the straight lines. However, consider removing the halo around the man's head and the woman's hair on the far side of her face.
A beautiful candid shot. Her pose is superb. You could have called it 'Gallus, Scotland'.
(gallus - [ˈgæləs] adj Scot bold; daring; reckless)