photographic art ?

[Clearvisionscott]

Hi my name is Scott and i am trying to make photographic art. (trying!)
I would love to hear suggestions and comments on photos.
I am using a DSL Panasonic Lumix FZ35.

Thanks

Scott

First photo F3.2 1/15 and ISO 400
Second photo F5.6 1/2 and ISO 100

[Clactonian]

You chosen a difficult subject matter Scott.
For my taste, geometric objects and light patterns of this sort need to be in pin sharp focus, which is not the case here. I think you would also be better off moving the harsh light source out of frame which will help with the exposure. Can you post larger images next time?

[gregj1763]

Hi Scott, I like the idea and it immediately reminded me of Dark side of the moon, Pink Floyd, so thats a good thing. Although that shows my age a bit.
Have to agree with Mike though, it all seems a bit out of focus to me but perhaps that might be a low resolution image you have posted?

[chauncey]

"Photographic Art"...what does that mean to you?

[Clearvisionscott]

Thanks for suggestions and comments