Fantastic shot Dan! I like everything about it, a beautiful model, and you've done her justice. If I had to be super critical, I would suggest that the small bit of lace showing on her shirt sleeve doesn't add anything to the image. But I'm not sure if it would look right cropped out.
Nice work!
Glad you like it. I think you are probably right on both counts. Cropping it out would (IMHO) result in and awkward crop that was too high and too close to the neck line. Pulling back for a loser crop to get the whole of the lace element in would have lost a little of the impact I was going for. I guess if I was being super professional I would clone it out.