Originally Posted by
James G
Paul,
As with your macro learning, you need to decide what is going to draw the eye into the photograph and also what provides the interest.
Light, and quality of light is best captured when there is a clear point of interest to dray the attention.
This shot, and I take your point about it being straight out of the camera is landscape in orientation only, and the zoom has in principle at least just saved a walk to get closer.
Compositionally this is similar to your earlier efforts and doesn't work for me, with too much dark foliage framing the capture . Detail to the right is almost non existent.