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    I like the frame that matches the subject very much; liked the perspective too; the only negative point is that there is not sufficient lighting towards the bottom
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    I do like this shot and the upward angle inside the rectangular 'matting.'. If you can tone down the hot spots out side (PP or re-shoot) I think you have a really good image here

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    I was troubled by the hot spots as well and the lighting at the bottom. Luckily neither the window nor the garden is going anywhere and i will have another go at it.

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    Interesting concept, but I find the frame rather heavy handed. If a frame is used (and I do like frames), it should complement, rather than compete with the image. Here I find that the frame grabs all of the viewer's attention.

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    Quote Originally Posted by GrumpyDiver View Post
    Interesting concept, but I find the frame rather heavy handed. If a frame is used (and I do like frames), it should complement, rather than compete with the image. Here I find that the frame grabs all of the viewer's attention.
    I saw this frame as part of the walling in but yes it is heavy and it does grab your first attention, but hey i am still working on my first 10,000

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    good image , but i think the shot can be improved if u had chosen a spot metering in the camera and exposed at the highlights to ensure that they arent blown out. and also , instead of a leaning elements in the photograph i would have shot in a way that the elements in the photograph are vertical .

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    Quote Originally Posted by praphul View Post
    good image , but i think the shot can be improved if u had chosen a spot metering in the camera and exposed at the highlights to ensure that they arent blown out. and also , instead of a leaning elements in the photograph i would have shot in a way that the elements in the photograph are vertical .
    I could have shot with a vertical effect but I would have had to have stood on the toilet. Not a really good idea at my size and age. I suppose I should mention that this window is a view window for men as they urinate.

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    then its k . just had my view i dint know the circumstances that u had while taking the photograph

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