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14th October 2013, 12:34 AM
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Terry
Shot in November, 2011. C&C welcomed.
You have seen this subject before - this is a different pose.
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14th October 2013, 12:51 AM
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Re: Terry
Cropped differently.
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14th October 2013, 01:02 AM
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Re: Terry
Both crops work well for me though I like the tighter crop a little bit better. (That's almost always the case for me.)
I'm not an expert in portraiture but I do have a fondness for informal portraits such as this one. So, I did the following:
1) Applied a stronger S-curve to the entire image.
2) Added brightness and contrast to the eyes.
3) Brightened the teeth.
4) Darkened the overall skin tone.
5) Removed the remaining hot spot on the forehead.
6) Didn't deal with the lack of blue on his left shoulder but would if I wanted to perfect the shot.
7) Didn't deal with the two catch lights in his left eye but I would remove the smaller one if I wanted to perfect it. (Something is creating a rectangular catch light in both eyes that looks abnormal to me, so you could attend to that as well.)
Let me know if you want me to post the results of my very quick treatment.
[EDIT: The image is shown below. When I messed up his right lower eye lid, I thought I had corrected it but apparently not.]
Last edited by Mike Buckley; 14th October 2013 at 10:07 AM.
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14th October 2013, 01:06 AM
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Re: Terry
Mike, I would like to see your edits to this photo. Thank you for taking the time to do it.
Bruce
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14th October 2013, 01:18 AM
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14th October 2013, 01:19 AM
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Re: Terry
Thank you Christina.
Bruce
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14th October 2013, 02:16 AM
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Re: Terry
I much prefer the 2nd crop, Bruce. The first one is 'Terry in the garden' but the second one is 'Terry'.
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14th October 2013, 10:09 AM
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Re: Terry
Bruce,
I added my very quickly adjusted version to my first post so you can easily see it alongside the explanation of the adjustments that I made.
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14th October 2013, 12:10 PM
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14th October 2013, 01:44 PM
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Re: Terry
Thank you all for your comments. Mike, I appreciate the edit.
Bruce
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