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    Terry

    Shot in November, 2011. C&C welcomed.
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    You have seen this subject before - this is a different pose.

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    Re: Terry

    Cropped differently.
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    Re: Terry

    Both crops work well for me though I like the tighter crop a little bit better. (That's almost always the case for me.)

    I'm not an expert in portraiture but I do have a fondness for informal portraits such as this one. So, I did the following:

    1) Applied a stronger S-curve to the entire image.
    2) Added brightness and contrast to the eyes.
    3) Brightened the teeth.
    4) Darkened the overall skin tone.
    5) Removed the remaining hot spot on the forehead.
    6) Didn't deal with the lack of blue on his left shoulder but would if I wanted to perfect the shot.
    7) Didn't deal with the two catch lights in his left eye but I would remove the smaller one if I wanted to perfect it. (Something is creating a rectangular catch light in both eyes that looks abnormal to me, so you could attend to that as well.)

    Let me know if you want me to post the results of my very quick treatment.

    [EDIT: The image is shown below. When I messed up his right lower eye lid, I thought I had corrected it but apparently not.]


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    Last edited by Mike Buckley; 14th October 2013 at 10:07 AM.

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    Re: Terry

    Mike, I would like to see your edits to this photo. Thank you for taking the time to do it.


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    Re: Terry

    I like these...

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    Re: Terry

    Thank you Christina.



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    Re: Terry

    I much prefer the 2nd crop, Bruce. The first one is 'Terry in the garden' but the second one is 'Terry'.

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    Re: Terry

    Bruce,

    I added my very quickly adjusted version to my first post so you can easily see it alongside the explanation of the adjustments that I made.

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    Re: Terry

    Nice picture .

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    Re: Terry

    Thank you all for your comments. Mike, I appreciate the edit.



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