Motion in Dance

[fotugraphy]

Hi, going forward on my photography venture I stopped and clicked another shot. Can you please review it and let me know what exactly is missing for it to make it much better?

It is my first attempt to shoot in an Event. Tried to capture the Energetic dance motion. I clicked it using my Kit lens & with the processing i tried to tone down the busy background.

Thank You



EXIF:
Camera : Sony A57
Aperture : F/22
Shutter : 1/6
ISO : 100

[Daisy Mae]

I love it Raj!

Lots of energy and colour beautifully captured

[fotugraphy]

I love it Raj!

Lots of energy and colour beautifully captured

Thanks for the review and appreciation

[Mike Buckley]

Great angle, color, motion, action and enthusiasm. Very, very well done!

Consider getting rid of the fabric in the upper left corner and changing the color balance of the skin tones to something more natural, not so orange.

[fotugraphy]

Great angle, color, motion, action and enthusiasm. Very, very well done!

Consider getting rid of the fabric in the upper left corner and changing the color balance of the skin tones to something more natural, not so orange.

Thank you for the review and appreciation. I will surely clone out the fabric and will also mask out the face n skin from the color balance I did in processing to give them natural tone.

[fotugraphy]

Great angle, color, motion, action and enthusiasm. Very, very well done!

Consider getting rid of the fabric in the upper left corner and changing the color balance of the skin tones to something more natural, not so orange.

Once again thanks for the suggestions. Edited the image as suggested...

[Shadowman]

very nice.

[fotugraphy]

very nice.

Thank You