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15th November 2013, 07:06 PM
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nowhere
nowhere by batmura, on Flickr
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15th November 2013, 10:15 PM
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Re: nowhere
Hi Murat,
This doesn't work for me I'm afraid - not that it your fault - on studying it for a bit I think the problem (for me!) is the incongruity of the smooth plastic looking device on the left.
If the image had been just the pier/jetty, it might have worked, albeit a bit of a clichéd shot. - and I say that while I have yet to shoot my version!
The triangle formed by the sloping bit of timber and its reflection and how this is cropped at the edge of frame was another thing I wondered if it was 'my problem', but I don't think it is, although I'd experiment with alternate crops on left - to see if it was better disappearing completely into water before it 'touches' the edge of frame.
However, all that said, the shot has good exposure, tonality and a nice texture (perhaps just a little over sharpened?)
Hope that helps,
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