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15th November 2013, 07:06 PM
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nowhere
![nowhere](http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5550/10873774666_a1d2fefc2b_c.jpg)
nowhere by batmura, on Flickr
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15th November 2013, 10:15 PM
#2
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Re: nowhere
Hi Murat,
This doesn't work for me I'm afraid - not that it your fault - on studying it for a bit I think the problem (for me!) is the incongruity of the smooth plastic looking device on the left.
If the image had been just the pier/jetty, it might have worked, albeit a bit of a clichéd shot. - and I say that while I have yet to shoot my version! ![Big Grin](https://cdn.cambridgeincolour.com/forums/images/smilies2/biggrin.png)
The triangle formed by the sloping bit of timber and its reflection and how this is cropped at the edge of frame was another thing I wondered if it was 'my problem', but I don't think it is, although I'd experiment with alternate crops on left - to see if it was better disappearing completely into water before it 'touches' the edge of frame.
However, all that said, the shot has good exposure, tonality and a nice texture (perhaps just a little over sharpened?)
Hope that helps,
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