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19th November 2013, 04:54 PM
#1
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19th November 2013, 05:09 PM
#2
Re: Shaker Village of Pleasant Hill
Cliff, very nice captures.
Bruce
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19th November 2013, 05:50 PM
#3
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My only problem would be with #4 where the bright central lighting is a little 'harsh'.
I would have preferred to light from further to the right, off camera flash, so the light was spread more evenly from the right hat towards the distant hat on the left.
Or alternatively shot with a longer exposure on a tripod and little or no flash.
But both of those options probably weren't available and it is a very minor point.
A little bit of selective reduction in brightness may be worth trying.
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19th November 2013, 07:04 PM
#4
Re: Shaker Village of Pleasant Hill
Very nice work Cliff, I think your weekend was successful. You've managed the light well IMO.
Dave
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19th November 2013, 07:17 PM
#5
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Thanks Bruce, Dave, and Geoff.
Geoff, I see your point. I may try the brightness reduction. Thanks for taking the time to comment.
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19th November 2013, 08:25 PM
#6
Re: Shaker Village of Pleasant Hill
Very nice Cliff. 2,3 and 4 stand out for me - particularly 3. A bit of burning and dodging might be in order here and there but a very nice and interesting set.
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19th November 2013, 08:47 PM
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19th November 2013, 08:53 PM
#8
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A very nice set. You definitely accomplished your goal in my mind. The light in #3 is particularly exquisite.
I love the composition of #6 as it pertains to the lamp in the window. Try different crops at the bottom to determine if you can come up with something more compelling.
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19th November 2013, 09:34 PM
#9
Re: Shaker Village of Pleasant Hill
Excellent set, Cliff. All are keepers, but the light in #3 is so gorgeous that I'd pick it for my overall favorite. Well done.
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20th November 2013, 12:07 AM
#10
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Very nice set Cliff. I agree with Kevin on #3 on the light. Thanks for sharing.
Mark,
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20th November 2013, 01:50 AM
#11
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An interesting series Cliff, your goal for the weekend worked.
Thanks for sharing.
Grahame
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20th November 2013, 02:32 AM
#12
Re: Shaker Village of Pleasant Hill
Outstanding composition #3 for me too.
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20th November 2013, 08:55 AM
#13
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20th November 2013, 09:24 AM
#14
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Cliff,
I think #3 and #5 are fantastic, well done.
Could you elaborate on the lighting/flash augmentation on #3?
I think I can see what you were trying to achieve with #7 in the sky and the building but the perspective issues over power the great work in the sky.
Robbie.
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22nd November 2013, 06:19 PM
#15
Re: Shaker Village of Pleasant Hill
Thanks everyone, I really appreciate you taking the time to look and comment.
Robbie - I didn't use a flash on #3. There is a door just out of the frame on camera left - that's where all that light is coming from. The day was cloudy so the light was well diffused. Also, I see your point on #7. I'll try to work on getting that straightened out.
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22nd November 2013, 06:26 PM
#16
Re: Shaker Village of Pleasant Hill
Great images Cliff..o'm crazy about #3..the light is amazing...so soft..like a dreamy sorta misty breeze kinda look..fantastic. Gratz
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22nd November 2013, 06:26 PM
#17
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That's a good set of images Cliff, well done. The converging verticals on #7 detract a little from the overall image. It looks like you had a good weekend.
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22nd November 2013, 06:40 PM
#18
Re: Shaker Village of Pleasant Hill
Hi Cliff,
great set; love No.3.
I agree about No.7 (converging verticals), but if it bothers you it will only take a couple of minutes to sort out.
Regards
John
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