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    Ola

    Hello
    That's couple of my very first portraits I'm very happy with them
    But if you think that I can do better something please share that thought with me

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    Re: Ola

    I like #7,8,9,10, and 11.



    Bruce

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    Re: Ola

    All good. The first five may have some slight technical problems but that is over ridden by their natural looking candid shot appeal.

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    Re: Ola

    All good , But 1 to 5 seem a bit like snapshots to me, Don't know why though. Not bad at all for a first attempt. Keep up the good work.


    The black and whites work good for me. 7 being my favorite.


    Mark,

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    Re: Ola

    beautiful images and model. I like them all and very well done, but I think the last one is my favourite.

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    Re: Ola

    9, 10, and 11, very nice.

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    Re: Ola

    A lovely model
    Overall good job! Everyone has different tastes, so my comments reflect those, and have nothing to do with right and wrong
    1 and 2. I always find lines coinciding with or near the face to be distracting. I don't know why this is and may only be me! If the lines are far enough away from the subject or OOF enough it can not matter.
    3 and 4 are pretty good.
    5 I keep thinking the crop at the bottom just isn't working for me. There is enough there that I think I should be cable to see some leg/context for her posture.
    6 I don't like smoking.
    7 I really like this one. The image really accentuates her classic beauty.
    8 I think a vertical would be better - love the red color!
    9 I keep thinking the hood/hat is pushed back on top of her head, just doesn't look right to me, I keep looking there to see what's going on, not her face.
    10 and 11 are pretty good. I love the texture of the hat.

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    Re: Ola

    Thank you all

    Brian that's a scarf. We just made up a hat from it to check how it's going to look like
    I'm glad that you like some of my shots

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    Re: Ola

    I forgot one more comment:
    Keep shooting!
    This is an awesome 'first attempt at portraits'. You have an excellent eye.

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    Re: Ola

    I like the look in #5, and7, 9,10,11 all work for me.

    Thanks

    Tim

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    Re: Ola

    I was tossed up between liking #10 or #11 the best. They are both nice but, I think #10 wins for me...

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