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19th November 2013, 08:24 PM
#1
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19th November 2013, 09:52 PM
#2
Re: Ola
I like #7,8,9,10, and 11.
Bruce
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19th November 2013, 09:58 PM
#3
Re: Ola
All good. The first five may have some slight technical problems but that is over ridden by their natural looking candid shot appeal.
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19th November 2013, 10:47 PM
#4
Re: Ola
All good , But 1 to 5 seem a bit like snapshots to me, Don't know why though. Not bad at all for a first attempt. Keep up the good work.
The black and whites work good for me. 7 being my favorite.
Mark,
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19th November 2013, 11:31 PM
#5
Re: Ola
beautiful images and model. I like them all and very well done, but I think the last one is my favourite.
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20th November 2013, 09:07 AM
#6
Re: Ola
9, 10, and 11, very nice.
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21st November 2013, 02:12 AM
#7
Re: Ola
A lovely model
Overall good job! Everyone has different tastes, so my comments reflect those, and have nothing to do with right and wrong
1 and 2. I always find lines coinciding with or near the face to be distracting. I don't know why this is and may only be me! If the lines are far enough away from the subject or OOF enough it can not matter.
3 and 4 are pretty good.
5 I keep thinking the crop at the bottom just isn't working for me. There is enough there that I think I should be cable to see some leg/context for her posture.
6 I don't like smoking.
7 I really like this one. The image really accentuates her classic beauty.
8 I think a vertical would be better - love the red color!
9 I keep thinking the hood/hat is pushed back on top of her head, just doesn't look right to me, I keep looking there to see what's going on, not her face.
10 and 11 are pretty good. I love the texture of the hat.
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21st November 2013, 11:23 PM
#8
Re: Ola
Thank you all
Brian that's a scarf. We just made up a hat from it to check how it's going to look like
I'm glad that you like some of my shots
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21st November 2013, 11:35 PM
#9
Re: Ola
I forgot one more comment:
Keep shooting!
This is an awesome 'first attempt at portraits'. You have an excellent eye.
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22nd November 2013, 12:17 AM
#10
Re: Ola
I like the look in #5, and7, 9,10,11 all work for me.
Thanks
Tim
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22nd November 2013, 04:00 AM
#11
Re: Ola
I was tossed up between liking #10 or #11 the best. They are both nice but, I think #10 wins for me...
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