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1st December 2013, 06:07 PM
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Does this work as a composition? C&C appreciated.
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Is this visually interesting?
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1st December 2013, 06:33 PM
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Re: Does this work as a composition? C&C appreciated.
Yes Jack,
If mine, I would look to 'simplify' some of the flowers (Tulips?) at the bottom of frame though - i.e. clone them out.
Particularly the ones on left edge of frame, probably the ones on the right and maybe even some in the middle.
Also, before the "clone paint" dries on the brush, there's a super bright triangular highlight in the blooms just left of centre, I'd clone that out, or at least darken it to same brightness as the highlights on the urn shaped thing.
But I am being picky - I like it regardless.
Hope that helps,
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1st December 2013, 09:24 PM
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Re: Does this work as a composition? C&C appreciated.
Dave,
Thanks for the input. 'Picky' is what I'm looking for, only way to improve.
I will work on 'weeding' the flowers and hit the hotspots.
Thanks again for your thoughts.
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