She has the look of a character avatar from Sim city or second life...the skin is so airbrushed that she looks superimposed .
It's not even that John.
Her outline looks 'Copy and pasted' and her reaction to him doesn't fit..for me it looks like 2 shots merged together.
They both seem too well dressed for either one of them to be down on their luck, John. Maybe a different title would help ?
I was going for the lady of the streets and a man named john.
Marie
I see you managed one without a cleavage - I hope your camera is not developing a fault..