Corridor To Heaven

[fotugraphy]

Hi, going forward on my photography venture I stopped and clicked another shot. Can you please review it and let me know what exactly is missing for it to make it much better?

It is an image of Cenotaph at Safdarjang Tomb, New Delhi. It is an HDR with EV Range: 0 +2 processed manually in Photoshop.

With the post processing I did subtle changes with the cenotaph and silhouette of my friend to create a drama in the image. I also tried to play with the shadow areas on the floor to Bind Viewer's eye in the image to the cenotaph.

Thank You

[Shadowman]

Raj,

I don't see anything missing except perhaps a few specs of white in the foreground that could be removed. Nice image. If you a more dramatic look and have the opportunity to reshoot, change your angle of view to a lower perspective.

[fotugraphy]

Raj,

I don't see anything missing except perhaps a few specs of white in the foreground that could be removed. Nice image. If you a more dramatic look and have the opportunity to reshoot, change your angle of view to a lower perspective.

Thanks a lot for the review and creative suggestion... I will be shooting this place again soon and will try my best to shoot the way you suggested. I will also work on it to remove the white spots on the floor.

[Shadowman]

Thanks a lot for the review and creative suggestion... I will be shooting this place again soon and will try my best to shoot the way you suggested. I will also work on it to remove the white spots on the floor.

Raj,

I didn't mean physically. I know what you meant, just in a good mood.

[Bobobird]

Nice shot.

[fotugraphy]

Raj,

I didn't mean physically. I know what you meant, just in a good mood.

haha will shoot with my Camera, actually i have a habit to use the word "Shoot" "Shot" lol

[fotugraphy]

Nice shot.

Thank you for the review and appreciation

[deetheturk]

Nice shot Raj,I agree with John,would like to see it from a lower angle!

[Polar01]

Raj very nice shot indeed, love large old building and the sort. I myself like to shot these sort of structures not from eye level, but instead from the eye level of a ten year old. Puts a hold new look on something we see every day.

Cheers: Allan

[fotugraphy]

Nice shot Raj,I agree with John,would like to see it from a lower angle!

Thanks a lot for the review I will surely work on the composition as suggested.

[fotugraphy]

Raj very nice shot indeed, love large old building and the sort. I myself like to shot these sort of structures not from eye level, but instead from the eye level of a ten year old. Puts a hold new look on something we see every day.

Cheers: Allan

Thank You for your kind review and suggestion. I will surely keep this in my mind for my next photo shoot.

[IzzieK]

Very nice concept. I have to agree with John and David...shooting low will make your shot better...

[FrankMi]

Nice detail Raj. Well processed, good eye for the composition, nice touch with the mystery human element at the back to capture the viewer's attention. I like it!

[Wavelength]

That is a great concept, an apt image for the cover page for a book of philosophy or meditation etc; i definitely would request you to remove the dirty segment at the bottom along that easily available horizontal line seen there

Regards

[fotugraphy]

Very nice concept. I have to agree with John and David...shooting low will make your shot better...

Thanks a lot for the review. I will definitely shoot just as suggested by shooting low.

[fotugraphy]

Nice detail Raj. Well processed, good eye for the composition, nice touch with the mystery human element at the back to capture the viewer's attention. I like it!

thanks for your kind review and your kind words.

[fotugraphy]

That is a great concept, an apt image for the cover page for a book of philosophy or meditation etc; i definitely would request you to remove the dirty segment at the bottom along that easily available horizontal line seen there

Regards

Thanks a lot for your valuable review. Thanks for your kind words about the cover Page. Really appreciated

I will surely remove the dirty segment at the bottom.