Mobile Phone Frame in Frame

[fotugraphy]

Hi, going forward on my photography venture I stopped and clicked another shot. Can you please review it and let me know what exactly is missing for it to make it much better?

It was a hazy day and i wanted to test my used lens minolta (70-300mm) which i bought last month, so i opted for India Gate to test it.

I saw these guys were using a very common trick to capture other's mobile phone's pic. So, i quickly zoomed and captured both of their mobile image. I have framed it in such a way that I achieve a zig zag counter points within the frames.(Viewer's eye starts from hands to mobile phone's image ( portrait mode mobile) in the main mobile then to the monument and then to the mobile behind the main mobile. (Sorry m not good with explaining things and for bad english).

I have also involved little bit of their heads and deliberately chopped the hand at the top to stop the viewer's eye to go out of the frame. I'm not sure if i framed the image correctly. (chopped head and hand involvement)

I processed it to give a little dreamy look with the center mobile image with good contrast.

Please share your views about the image.

Thank You

PS : Please click on the image for lightbox screen view (Highly recommended)

[Shadowman]

Raj,

It's good enough for your available opportunity to capture as you did. A few inches more subject matter here and there would have been great, but what's actually captured (picture in picture) makes up for what was lost in the background, second cameraman (or should I say phoneman).

[fotugraphy]

Raj,

It's good enough for your available opportunity to capture as you did. A few inches more subject matter here and there would have been great, but what's actually captured (picture in picture) makes up for what was lost in the background, second cameraman (or should I say phoneman).

Thanks a lot for your valuable review and the feedback. Really learning a lot and really appreciated. I will surely keep your suggestion in my mind while such shooting such frames.

[Jeffbridge]

Fantastic shot!!! Really nice!

[fotugraphy]

Fantastic shot!!! Really nice!

Thanks a lot for the review and appreciation