I love how you framed this shot with the trees. I played around with it a bit and I am not sure if it as much improved as it is just changed...
I globally increased the contrast, selected the girls and further increased contrast and structure, I increased the structure of the headland across the water, then I cropped it a bit and added a border.
The two girls are of equal size in each image but, they seem relatively larger in the cropped image...
Last edited by rpcrowe; 25th January 2014 at 06:05 AM.
Agree with that, for sure.
Imagine this picture without the framing and it's not nearly as interesting. It all works together very nicely for me.
I think Richard's edits in general improve it, but wonder if the structure shouldn't be added globally and the girls not brought up quite as much. They look a bit pasted on (from a darker, more contrasty and structured image) in this revised version.
I am just learning to use control points and am wondering if they don't work too well sometimes.
Yes, Richard, a crop like that was the first thing which I considered with this scene.
I have a hunch that working with the original RAW file would provide a different look to the image.