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    Beneath the Sun

    10mm, f/4.5m, ISO 200, 1/1250sec

    Beneath the Sun

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    John,

    Maximum Security Viewing Area? :-)
    I'm a bit conflicted, I'm fascinated with the receding arches (jumper fence) yet I keep going back to the couple in the foreground.

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    Quote Originally Posted by flashback View Post
    John,

    Maximum Security Viewing Area? :-)
    I'm a bit conflicted, I'm fascinated with the receding arches (jumper fence) yet I keep going back to the couple in the foreground.
    I think those are Spiderman traps.

    The original had so much contrast that the couple was deep in shadows, after converting to monotone I decided the couple should be part of the overall image and the lines would maintain their dominance.

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    Re: Beneath the Sun

    I love your treatment of this shot, John. Is this a viewing area for what building? I am just beginning to love B/W ... and this is very, very good.

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    Quote Originally Posted by IzzieK View Post
    I love your treatment of this shot, John. Is this a viewing area for what building? I am just beginning to love B/W ... and this is very, very good.
    Hi Isabel,

    That's the Empire State Building. I'd been to NYC many times and finally decided to see what the fuss was about. This was shot in winter. temperature about fifty degrees so not an unpleasant experience. Thanks for the comments.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shadowman View Post
    I think those are Spiderman traps.

    The original had so much contrast that the couple was deep in shadows, after converting to monotone I decided the couple should be part of the overall image and the lines would maintain their dominance.
    They are, they do, it works. Nicely done.

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    Quote Originally Posted by flashback View Post
    They are, they do, it works. Nicely done.
    Thanks Jack.

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    Re: Beneath the Sun

    It's a great image - nice tonal range and strong composition. Is there no way to pull some of the shadow off the foreground couple - it seems to me they want to be a bit more lit up.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Downrigger View Post
    It's a great image - nice tonal range and strong composition. Is there no way to pull some of the shadow off the foreground couple - it seems to me they want to be a bit more lit up.
    I could do that, they were originally in deep shadow. Thanks for the comments.

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    Re: Beneath the Sun

    Edit of shadows for the couple.

    Beneath the Sun

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    Re: Beneath the Sun

    Nice shot !

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    Quote Originally Posted by MichaelClark View Post
    Nice shot !
    Thanks Michael.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shadowman View Post
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    Beneath the Sun
    This is really superb shot ! nice place and beautiful picture ...

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    Quote Originally Posted by David547 View Post
    This is really superb shot ! nice place and beautiful picture ...
    Thanks David.

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    Re: Beneath the Sun

    Version 2 does it for me John. The deep shadow of the original was a bit of a block because I kept wondering what they looked like. Now the strong leading lines take me right through the comp. Nice image.

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    Quote Originally Posted by John 2 View Post
    Version 2 does it for me John. The deep shadow of the original was a bit of a block because I kept wondering what they looked like. Now the strong leading lines take me right through the comp. Nice image.
    Thanks John.

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