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    I think I got it right?

    I think I got it right?

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    Re: I think I got it right?

    10/10 for spelling, punctuation, and grammar!

    9.5/10 for the image (IMO) - personally, I'd deal to that brighter leaf that's bottom left (it draws the eye) and possibly push the colours a bit more. Perhaps a touch more output sharpening too? Other than that, looking good to me.

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    Re: I think I got it right?

    Quote Originally Posted by Colin Southern View Post
    10/10 for spelling, punctuation, and grammar!

    9.5/10 for the image (IMO) - personally, I'd deal to that brighter leaf that's bottom left (it draws the eye) and possibly push the colours a bit more. Perhaps a touch more output sharpening too? Other than that, looking good to me.
    leaf at the bottom left... you're right. The colour is a tough one. The inner blossom is almost blood red and the outer moves into a very pale salmon pink. lately I have had a tendency to over sharpen so i have been intentionally dulling things down a bit. Possibly I have gone too far.

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    Re: I think I got it right?

    Nice one.

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    Re: I think I got it right?

    This is two days running we have had a well exposed flower, no highlights caused by the harsh sun and great detail in the petals, well done Brian.

    Grahame

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    Re: I think I got it right?

    Quote Originally Posted by Stagecoach View Post
    This is two days running we have had a well exposed flower, no highlights caused by the harsh sun and great detail in the petals, well done Brian.

    Grahame
    still got to work on the fine and not so fine details of composition but it is coming along.

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    Re: I think I got it right?

    Great image Brian, nice soft lighting and great texture in the flower. I agree with leaf on bottoom left, other than that, I really like it. Well done

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    Re: I think I got it right?

    Quote Originally Posted by ClaudioG View Post
    Great image Brian, nice soft lighting and great texture in the flower. I agree with leaf on bottoom left, other than that, I really like it. Well done
    thank-you. false modesty aside the people in this group have been great teachers.

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