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    Ship Away

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    Re: Ship Away

    I like the way you framed the boat with the arch John.

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    As usual, very creative, John...I like the atmosphere too.

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    Re: Ship Away

    Lovely colour - was it dawn ?

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    Quote Originally Posted by deetheturk View Post
    I like the way you framed the boat with the arch John.
    Thanks David.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kaye Leggett View Post
    Lovely colour - was it dawn ?
    Kaye,

    Thanks for the comments. It was about 8:00AM, overcast day about to become enveloped by fog.

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    Quote Originally Posted by IzzieK View Post
    As usual, very creative, John...I like the atmosphere too.
    Isabel,

    Thanks for the comments.

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    Hi John.

    I find the bright areas of the sky pull the eye away from the ship. You might consider cropping off the left, top and right so that no sky is showing around the outside of the gateway. We can see the ship but we would see more details of the hull and the structures above the main deck if you were to lighten those areas.

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    Re: Ship Away

    Quote Originally Posted by Ken Curtis View Post
    Hi John.

    I find the bright areas of the sky pull the eye away from the ship. You might consider cropping off the left, top and right so that no sky is showing around the outside of the gateway. We can see the ship but we would see more details of the hull and the structures above the main deck if you were to lighten those areas.
    Ken,

    Thanks for the comments and suggestions.

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    Re: Ship Away

    That's well seen John. I must admit that the lighter areas in the sky are a bit distracting but that's how it was and I don't personally believe that a crop would improve matters. As it is, it tells a story and that's enough.

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    Quote Originally Posted by John 2 View Post
    That's well seen John. I must admit that the lighter areas in the sky are a bit distracting but that's how it was and I don't personally believe that a crop would improve matters. As it is, it tells a story and that's enough.
    John,

    Thanks for the comments.

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