Very nice.
My first thoughts about alterations, Randall, involve that area of somewhat bland sky.
You could try a crop of the top and right side to concentrate the scene on where the main 'action' occurs.
Hi Randall,I think it needs a very little rotating clockwise ,the image looks a bit tilt if my eyes are not wrong.I like the colours and reflections
I'd crop the bottom and rhs to remove the concrete areas.
Hi Randall.
I downloaded your image and played around with it a bit. Not sure I can tell you how to improve the image, but I did notice some interesting things. There is a LOVE sign that seems like it would make for an interesting image, perhaps if you had moved to the right and zoomed in on it. I lightened the image a bit, especially the shadows and noticed some nice coloring in the pool's water that may have added interest.
There does not seem to be any location in this image for the eye to rest. It keeps moving looking for a center of interest. Perhaps if you had selected just a few trees, or the Love sign, or maybe the bar with the human at far left, it would have made for a more interesting image. Don't know the answer though. Just rambling on.
I like it. The colors and reflections are really nice. I agree with the suggestion of cropping the right side. That might improve it a little.