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    Fishing at Dawn

    The last time I went to Pompton lake was almost three month ago when the lake was still frozen. When I went there last Saturday before sunrise, the ice has totally gone. Some cloud hanging in the low sky, the surface of the lake was still a little bit misty. The fishing boats were there even before I arrived. I took a lot of shots for these boats. In the PP, I order to create a warm dreamy morning tone, I increase the white balance. For some of the image, I decrease the saturation. I want to know if I really achieve that.

    C&C welcome

    BTW, I realize that my speed was set too slow. Most of the boat are NOT crystal clear.


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    Re: Fishing at Dawn

    Mission accomplished, Hui.
    I really like your work.

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    Re: Fishing at Dawn

    I think you have achieved your goal in all except no 3 - I think the boat is too far away and so gives a different sort of image - still good though.

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    Re: Fishing at Dawn

    Hi Andre, thanks for your quick response!

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    Re: Fishing at Dawn

    If the objective was to make a beautiful image that had fishing as the key theme in the picture, then I think this is the outstanding image from this series.

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    If the objective was to make a beautiful image of a peaceful, rural landscape in which there was a lake and boat upon it, then this is the outstanding image of the series.

    Fishing at Dawn
    In other words, I don't think we can compare like-with-like and say that one is better than another. For me, these two in particular are glorious images. I think the composition of this image is superb.

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    Kaye,

    You are right about the #3. I was little bit hesitate to include the #3 in this set.

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    Re: Fishing at Dawn

    Very nice series.

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    Re: Fishing at Dawn

    Very nice series Hui

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    Your shots are very nice as always Hui

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    Re: Fishing at Dawn

    Hui, #1 is a little bit too strong in colour. Maybe you can tone it down a little bit. The clarity of #1 and #2 are really great but #2 the top left hand side with the branches sticking out needs to be removed, I think...and there is a cut off barn or house at the right side. That bothers me.

    The rest of the shots are superb with the misty feeling it brought out in the shots.

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    Re: Fishing at Dawn

    Nice photographs.



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    Re: Fishing at Dawn

    #s 5,6 & 7 will really catch the attention of any fisherman, put them in a tackle outlet and they'd fly off the shelves, my favourite though, #7.

    steve

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    Re: Fishing at Dawn

    I think the first is a little over-saturated, Hui. I really like the processing of the 2nd, but for colour and composition, the 6th is my favourite.

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    Re: Fishing at Dawn

    Hui, wonderful images. Yes, I think you accomplished what you set out to do and more.

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    Re: Fishing at Dawn

    Hi Donald,
    Thanks for analyze these two images. My initial idea for this serious is showing the fishing at a peaceful morning . I do like the #3 a lot and decide to show it here together with other "fishing" pictures.

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    Re: Fishing at Dawn

    Hui,

    Very nice captures and composition. Like a series of painting.

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    Re: Fishing at Dawn

    Hui you have excelled with these, your working of the compositions from the different viewpoints is great. I will not even try to pick a favourite, individually they are all good.

    Grahame

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    Re: Fishing at Dawn

    Quote Originally Posted by IzzieK View Post
    Hui, #1 is a little bit too strong in colour. Maybe you can tone it down a little bit. The clarity of #1 and #2 are really great but #2 the top left hand side with the branches sticking out needs to be removed, I think...and there is a cut off barn or house at the right side. That bothers me.
    Isabel,
    Thanks for your opinion. I will definitely try to modify #1 and #2.

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    Re: Fishing at Dawn

    John, David, Binnur, Bruce, steve, Greg, Jon, Leslie, Grahame,

    THanks all of you for your kind words.

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