Ah John...what beautiful eyes she has...
Wonderful image, Jon! Probably your best so far.
Try toning down the bright spots at the top of the frame and in the lower left corner so they don't pull us away from her eyes and teeth.
You do. The problem is that we adults also have to carry around four times as much weight. At least that's my excuse and I'm sticking to it.
Awesome shot Jon!
About the only thing I might suggest might be to lose a few of the flyaways on her face, the one in her right (camera left) eye and maybe that little hotspot on the tip of her nose.
It's always a toss-up for me as to whether the flyaways in an informal image such as this one are an enhancement or a detraction. I like them in this one but I wouldn't miss them if they were removed.
Very cute!