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[leslie1283]

Sunrise at Changi Beach

C & C are welcome.


#1

[Shadowman]

Nicely composed and lit.

[bnnrcn]

I like the image Leslie I find the dirt in the foreground a bit distracting and I would crop it and leave the shadowy dark part. IMO square crop doesn't work very nice for such a lovely landscape , that's why I would also crop from the top to the end of the big dark cloud. Lovely colours and nice silhouette

[Downrigger]

Very nice - fabulous light and the silhouette works nicely with the figure, which in turn has nice movement. I agree with Binnur that square somehow understates this, but differ in that I like some of that textured foreground, so might instead experiment with 4x5 by taking out a little bit of foreground and a little bit of sky.

[deetheturk]

Very nice Leslie,beautiful colours!

[leslie1283]

Thanks John

[leslie1283]

Binnur,

Thank you for your suggestion.

[leslie1283]

Very nice - fabulous light and the silhouette works nicely with the figure, which in turn has nice movement. I agree with Binnur that square somehow understates this, but differ in that I like some of that textured foreground, so might instead experiment with 4x5 by taking out a little bit of foreground and a little bit of sky.

Mark,

Thank you for your suggestion. I will try 4 X 5

#2

[leslie1283]

David,
Thank you.

[bnnrcn]

Hi Leslie , after seeing your crop , I think that cropping the big dark cloud is not necessary The composition works fine like this. You might as well crop the empty part of sky above the dark cloud a little bit if you want though

[leslie1283]

Hi Leslie , after seeing your crop , I think that cropping the big dark cloud is not necessary The composition works fine like this. You might as well crop the empty part of sky above the dark cloud a little bit if you want though

Binnur,

Thx for your suggestion.

[John 2]

Good image anyway, but on balance, I like the cropped version better.

[leslie1283]

John 2,
Thank for for viewing & your comment.