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[Werner]

[bnnrcn]

I like the look of the strawberry. I would prefer to shoot it with a vertical frame by leaving some more space in the foreground and less space on the left

[Mike Buckley]

I like this as is. The horizontal lines wouldn't work for me in the context of a vertical orientation.

[Shadowman]

Nicely done, title adds to the story even though there really shouldn't be one.

[Werner]

Thanks for the responses.