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    Re: flock to come backe

    Quote Originally Posted by Mike Buckley View Post
    It looks better but it's still underexposed in my mind.
    hi mike thanks for attention
    time this pic is evening if i lighter maybe the same of daylight not evening

    do you think it need to light ?
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    Re: flock to come backe

    yes binnur you always said right you are very good friend for me
    sorry icant upload tv video idont know why but ijust read book 2days working LR

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    Re: flock to come backe

    Quote Originally Posted by vaez View Post
    time this pic is evening if i lighter maybe the same of daylight not evening
    I hope you don't mind me showing you what I was thinking of. For me, my version still conveys early evening though with more interest. I made the adjustments in the order shown below:

    1. Adjusted the curve to both brighten the overall image and to add a little more midtone contrast
    2. Removed the strong green cast of the sliver of sky at part of the very top of the frame by reducing the saturation in that area (Didn't attend to the small, relatively blue area immediately below it though I should have.)
    3. Added warmth to convey the quality of diffused, evening sunlight



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    Re: flock to come backe

    Normally you can reach the web site by clicking on this link http://tv.adobe.com/ . It is good to have a book anyway, you can read it again and again when necessary

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    Re: flock to come backe

    Quote Originally Posted by Mike Buckley View Post
    I hope you don't mind me showing you what I was thinking of. For me, my version still conveys early evening though with more interest. I made the adjustments in the order shown below:

    1. Adjusted the curve to both brighten the overall image and to add a little more midtone contrast
    2. Removed the strong green cast of the sliver of sky at part of the very top of the frame by reducing the saturation in that area (Didn't attend to the small, relatively blue area immediately below it though I should have.)
    3. Added warmth to convey the quality of diffused, evening sunlight



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    hi mike thanks your adjustment is very better then me
    you are good photographer
    kindest regards
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    Re: flock to come backe

    Quote Originally Posted by bnnrcn View Post
    Normally you can reach the web site by clicking on this link http://tv.adobe.com/ . It is good to have a book anyway, you can read it again and again when necessary
    hi binnur thanks for attention yes at least ican see video LSinthe you tube
    cheers vaez

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    Re: flock to come backe

    vaez,

    Now that I have learned that you like my treatment, the most important suggestion I can make for you at this early stage of your learning curve is to use the histogram as your guide. The histogram shouldn't dictate everything that you do, but at least until you develop a vision for how you want your images to look, keeping your eye on the histogram when you capture the image and during the entire time that you process it will reap huge rewards.

    Consider the three histograms shown below as an example of that. The first one is of your first version, the second one of your second version and the third one of my version. Notice that as each photo looked better to you than the previous photo, each successive histogram also displayed more data on the horizontal axis.

    Not all successful photos will have data displayed across that entire axis. As examples, that won't happen when making a photo of a black wall or a white wall and the two histograms of the walls will look very different from each other and the histograms displayed below. Even so, planning for data to be distributed across the entire horizontal axis is a great starting point for making landscape photos until you understand the nuances and relatively few situations when that should not happen.


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    Re: flock to come backe

    That is much better, good though.

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    Re: flock to come backe

    thanks steven

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    Re: flock to come backe

    thanks mike for good guide

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