befor&after pp

[vaez]

comments and suggestion welcome always

[bnnrcn]

Your PP skills are improving Vaez . I would add medium contrast to the image ( I hope there is a medium contrast curve in LR as there is in ACR) and I would also brighten it just a bit (May be +0,30). But there might be other suggestions from other members who use LR, so let's see the other comments about PP.

For the composition,I think there are two alternatives:

1- I would crop half of the sky because your main subject is mountains . They would stand out more and the sky wouldn't compete with the mountains in this way.

2- if you crop half of the foreground grass then there is actually another composition with lovely sky .

BTW very nice image

[Shadowman]

Nicely done.

[vaez]

Your PP skills are improving Vaez . I would add medium contrast to the image ( I hope there is a medium contrast curve in LR as there is in ACR) and I would also brighten it just a bit (May be +0,30). But there might be other suggestions from other members who use LR, so let's see the other comments about PP.

For the composition,I think there are two alternatives
1- I would crop half of the sky because your main subject is mountains . They would stand out more and the sky wouldn't compete with the mountains in this way.

2- if you crop half of the foreground grass then there is actually another composition with lovely sky .

BTW very nice image

hi binnur thanks alot for comment and good suggestion
yes thats right id like know opinion other members who use LR for sharpening and noise reduction and composition

[Otavio]

Great improvement, Vaez! I do like your PP here. Consider a bit more sharpening. Well done!

[vaez]

Great improvement, Vaez! I do like your PP here. Consider a bit more sharpening. Well done!

hi otavio thanks for comment i post this image for pp is it good or not ?
do you doing pp for this pic here or your computer sorry i cant see here
kindest regards vaez

[Downrigger]

Nice, Vaez. I think you have addressed the main issues for this image nicely. I assume the original is a RAW file?

[vaez]

Nice, Vaez. I think you have addressed the main issues for this image nicely. I assume the original is a RAW file?

hi mark thanks for comment what do you mean ? i had travel to village about 10 days ago
i take photo with raw and pp with LR do you work with LR?
Ihappy learn of you and other friends

[elfbob]

Vaez, was the original image composed with "rule of thirds" as the standard? If so, it obeys the principles well. I personally don't do much landscape photography so my opinions may be less valued than others, but rule of thirds is a "guideline" to help with composition especially when a vista is so overwhelming that "WOW" takes over. I use LR 4.4 to process my RAW images & join it to PSE8 for end functions that LR cannot do. I don't know what version of LR you are using but have you tried the Graduated Filter in LR develop module to brighten the areas just below the mountain peaks? This might take a few tries to learn but its a valuable tool. The adjustment brush can also be used to modify areas that are illuminated differently than their neighbors. Once again I don't know how your camera was setup, meaning Av, Tv or perhaps Pa(program auto). I'm sort of old school film thinking & capture 95% of DSLR images with camera set on M so I use the camera's meter to help me set the f/ & shutter speed for a decent exposure.

[vaez]

Vaez, was the original image composed with "rule of thirds" as the standard? If so, it obeys the principles well. I personally don't do much landscape photography so my opinions may be less valued than others, but rule of thirds is a "guideline" to help with composition especially when a vista is so overwhelming that "WOW" takes over. I use LR 4.4 to process my RAW images & join it to PSE8 for end functions that LR cannot do. I don't know what version of LR you are using but have you tried the Graduated Filter in LR develop module to brighten the areas just below the mountain peaks? This might take a few tries to learn but its a valuable tool. The adjustment brush can also be used to modify areas that are illuminated differently than their neighbors. Once again I don't know how your camera was setup, meaning Av, Tv or perhaps Pa(program auto). I'm sort of old school film thinking & capture 95% of DSLR images with camera set on M so I use the camera's meter to help me set the f/ & shutter speed for a decent exposure.

hi Robert
thanks for comment and suggestions info about my camera is camera module canon EOS kiss x4 f/13 exposure time 1/250
iso 100 focal lenth 28mm and set camera with m and I use old version 3LR

[Otavio]

hi otavio thanks for comment i post this image for pp is it good or not ?
do you doing pp for this pic here or your computer sorry i cant see here
kindest regards vaez

No, I did not post any PP that I did to this one. your version is quite good, in my opinion. Good job!

[vaez]

thank you so much