Hi Christina,
What you have - in my opinion - is the aviation equivalent of "letting the plane fly the pilot" instead of the other way around.
It's a great image, but instead of meekly begging the pixels to do what you want, my suggestion is to GRAB THEM BY THE THROAT and SHOW THEM WHO'S BOSS! Push the levels - push the clarity and saturation - push the sharpening. And when you're done, don't just serve it up like slops in an army mess tent ... PRESENT IT TO THE WORLD (after all, it's your baby - be proud of it!).
Here's a "before and after". Same image - world of difference. Do you agree?
GO GET EM!