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    Recent shot I like

    I haven't been around too much lately as I'm in the middle of a move. Selling one house and buying another....major league pain in the butt....

    Here is one I did recently that I liked quite a bit. See what you all think.

    Recent shot I like

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    Re: Recent shot I like

    Like it, maybe you could bring out the shadow detail in the models lovely hair? looks a lot like your avatar!

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    Re: Recent shot I like

    Nicely done.

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    Re: Recent shot I like

    Nicely done and a good example of how "breaking the rules" works. Normally, one tries to keep the eyes of the model more centred so that the eyes appear to be more balanced, but in this shot, with your model looking back, it gives her a bit more of a "naughty" look; which is in keeping with the spirit of the image. Had she looked in a way to have her eyes more centred, I think the image would have had a more aloof look, and that would probably not work quite as well.

    The one tiny quibble I have, is that it would have been nice if your hair light were a bit brigher and a pushed back towards the background a bit more. The dark hair and dark background at camera right, blend a bit too much for my taste.

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    Re: Recent shot I like

    Here you go, Manfred. I like this a little better too.

    Recent shot I like

    Mark, it looks a lot like my avatar because it's the same girl. She's a dear friend who is a pro model and a photographer as well. She's helped me a lot over the years.

    Thanks for the comments.

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    Re: Recent shot I like

    Quote Originally Posted by saea501 View Post
    Here you go, Manfred. I like this a little better too.

    Recent shot I like

    Mark, it looks a lot like my avatar because it's the same girl. She's a dear friend who is a pro model and a photographer as well. She's helped me a lot over the years.

    Thanks for the comments.
    Better. Nicely done!

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