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    Walt Disney Concert Hall in B n W

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    Walt Disney Concert Hall in B n W

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    Re: Walt Disney Concert Hall in B n W

    like no 1 no, 2 not so much, if you want C&C let us know.

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    Re: Walt Disney Concert Hall in B n W

    Quote Originally Posted by Mark von Kanel View Post
    like no 1 no, 2 not so much, if you want C&C let us know.
    Please, if you may.

    Thanks

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    Re: Walt Disney Concert Hall in B n W

    Quite happy to victor,

    No 1 im going to leave to someone else because i personally dont like it and am struggling to be constructive, maybe if you remove the noise?

    No 2 however i love. the abstarct lines and curves are fab, it reminds me of the googenhiem in new york (i think that the curved building) not in its shape but all the curved architecture. Ilke the way the light reflects in the lower part of the structure and feel that the conversion you have done compliments the image.

    i would clone out the lights and maybe the windows in the middle. its all only an opinion though

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    Re: Walt Disney Concert Hall in B n W

    oops! missed the shadowing bottom left, needs some attention unless its deliberate for some reason

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    Re: Walt Disney Concert Hall in B n W

    +10 to Mark's comments. Couldn't add anymore to that except perhaps, leave the window and lighten the bottom part after removing the lights. The window breaks the monotonous lines and curves. It creates an interesting mood to the shot maybe?

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    Re: Walt Disney Concert Hall in B n W

    Interesting crops on both, which is what I like about the first, your positioning of the structure within the frame. Was that a carefully composed shot or was there a bit taken off the edges? Doesn't matter either way, the alignment is perfect. I could overlook the noise on the structure, but the noise in the sky could be toned down a bit.

    Second image, nicely captured and converted. nice positioning and spotted formation.

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