Nicely captured.
You captured a great smile! Perhaps the use of a little fill flash might have opened the shadows around his eyes...
Thank you Richard. I am a newbie and I haven't started to explore lighting yet. I am eager to learn, but am having a hard time finding someone to give me lessons. Have looked into courses at the university but most are online and I have a hard time learning that way. I prefer to learn by doing :-) If you have any ideas related to finding someone, let me know. Thank you.
You did a great job capturing his personality. Regarding composition, I always object to things "growing out of" a person's head.
Kim, it would be a whole lot easier to reshoot the image but, next time, don't just take a quick snapshot.
Pause a few minutes and consider what you already know, but didn't use.
Kim, I am not sure what camera you are using but, I found this mini tutorial on using the built-in flash...
http://photographylife.com/how-to-ge...r-pop-up-flash
I use hotshoe flash so I cannot really help you on the pop-up flash.
If you can afford one, a hotshoe flash is a great accessory which can immediately improve a persons imagery. Not knowing your camera, I cannot recommend a specific hotshoe flash.
If you shoot Canon and want one of the cheapest flashes possible, you can get a used Canon 420EX for $75 USD or less on eBay. It's not the very best flash but it can do a very decent job in limited situations. One of the failings of the 420EX is that it doesn't have manual control. However, it does have high speed sync capability which is quite important in fill flash situations. It is also the lightest of the Canon full size hotshoe flashes...
http://www.ebay.com/itm/Canon-Speedl...item2a41ba8af7
I used one for years and still own it....
You can add a Joe Demb Flash Diffuser Pro for some very nice effects.
www.dembflashproducts.com
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Nice shot Kim
You have good reasons to like this picture. Nice capture!
Thank you Binnur and Daniel. I thought I might have gotten away with the chimney behind his head, since you can see the whole fireplace, but I guess the emotional side of the image, blurred my judgement. It's all about learning, and I am definitely learning a lot from the comments shared with me, and the amazing images you all post ...that's what I strive for...someday :-)
Kim: Not knowing your post-processing skills or the software you are using, with a reasonably good cloning tool such as the one in LR5 (much improved over LR4), the task of removing the fireplace would be only of average difficulty thanks to the otherwise very plain background.
Kim, to me the chimney is not objectionable, as you can see the fire. This gives it even a more relaxing "warming" atmosphere for a very nice picture of your brother. Had the rest of the fireplace not been visible, and just the chimney; then yes, I would find it objectionable.
Good job, remember; we never stop learning; and this forum is filled with people that bend over backwards to assist us wanting to learn more!