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[Neilmac50]

I liked the way the shadow pattern repeated itself further into the image, not sure of the crop from right to left and whether the balance of the white wall on the right works.Neil

[Shadowman]

Nicely captured, I think the white works as is.

[AB26]

Neil,

This is a rather interesting image. I like the idea.

The leading line leads the eye to the far wall, maybe that should be in focus.
Would it be possible to get the window on the top floor in the image without cutting it?
The image can be split in half by the vertical wall, 50/50 on either side of the vertical line.
Keep the shadow leading from the top right corner.

The B&W works well for this shot.

[Kodiak]

The white wall on the right contains details and works somehow as negative
space in your take and adds depth. I think it's nice as is.

[bnnrcn]

Hi Neil, I like the composition as is. Reducing highlights a little bit on the white wall on the right might help

[Neilmac50]

Thank you for your comments, Binnur the one area where I spent the most time editing was that pesky white wall,trying to get the balance right,wanted some detail not just pure white,found it the most difficult part to decide on.

[Wavelength]

Nice story....