Coca-Cola Cooler

[Tom Barry]

Coke1-web by tombarry975, on Flickr

[Marie Hass]

Hi, Tom. I would be remiss if i let this one go by without commenting. Something is not quite right with this image, and I think it is the composition. The cooler is awesome and probably look better with a different background and without the cord snaking through the picture.

hope this helps,

'Rie

[ShaneS]

I agree with Marie and I would also add that if you can get there again you might consider a slightly lower vantage point? As is, though I would like to see a portrait orientation with more of the fence, a bit more foreground and a little lighter hand on the contrast in PP. Maybe selective contrast on the cooler only as the fence really pops out at me as it is now.

[IzzieK]

The old cooler looks interesting...but ! I think I would like to see the colour version without the cords (like Marie sez) and if you can selectively blur the background, it will be nicer...just my opinion. I agree with Shane about shooting at a lower vantage point...and difference in angle will make a big difference too.

[Tom Barry]

Thanks for the comments and suggestions.