Do you think a little more sharpness could help as long an it didn't make the smooth places grainy? I do like the color combination. Maybe a little more contrast?
Good exposure and I agree with all of the comments made by Nick. You could consider cropping a bit off the bottom but the main problem is the blue in the left background which needs to be cloned out or the colour changed to blend with the rest of the background.
And oh, before anyone sez anything else...
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