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    Foggy Morning

    A few pics from a foggy morning....
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    Foggy Morning

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    Re: Foggy Morning

    Nice captures Paul, loving the spider webs

    David

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    Re: Foggy Morning

    Very ghostly looking ship. Nice captures.

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    Re: Foggy Morning

    Quote Originally Posted by PaulRJennings View Post
    A few pics from a foggy morning....
    Hi Paul,

    your #1 is great! The rendition, IMO, has 2 weak points:
    • a tad too dark… the white of the boat should pop up a bit more,
    • needs a tweak counter clock wise.

    The webs great too but the DoF is not quite enough!

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    Re: Foggy Morning

    Thanks David and John. Thanks Kodiak, the vertical lines (windows and masts) are straight up and down, the water line however does not run straight along the boat's side. It actually rises up around the centre of the boat then drops a bit towards the bow. I didn't what the boats glaring white as it takes away from the mood of the shot IMHO. I agree about the first two web shots (DOF) but on the third I think it draws the eye to the more pronounced water drops in the centre of the web.

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    Re: Foggy Morning

    Nice series Paul. I would have to agree with your opinion with regards to the DOF in the third shot. I like it.

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    Re: Foggy Morning

    Hi Paul , I loved #1 and #4

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