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26th September 2014, 09:18 AM
#1
Good morning. . . good evening
After my day spent in the river photographing bridge reflections, I decided to stay on dry land for my next shots !
This first one was taken in the morning at a roundabout in the town of Ceret where I live:
I added a slightly warming colour but masked out the water to make it whiter and more dominant, perhaps a slight vignette would have achieved the same thing. . .?
This second one was taken in the evening just after sundown at the local wine chateau "Aubry", a few minutes cycle ride from the town:
I had to merge a few shots to get the foreground, chateau, and sky in some sort of balance, then I tweaked a few layers and Its pretty close to how it looked last night but it somehow 'feels' overworked. Perhaps it's just that I know how long I spent !!
C&C welcome please
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26th September 2014, 09:38 AM
#2
Re: Good morning. . . good evening
Originally Posted by
moopy goops
C&C welcome please
1. Very good composition, forced rendition and needs keystone adjustment.
I like the tinted monochrome.
2.Again, very good composition. The level adjustments done on the sky
are also applied to tree tops and castle… this needs severe practice!
Magnifique région!
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26th September 2014, 11:57 AM
#3
Re: Good morning. . . good evening
Interesting shots, I like the first image for the tonal effects and architecture.
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26th September 2014, 05:45 PM
#4
Re: Good morning. . . good evening
Both good composition, Mat...I love them both...
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26th September 2014, 05:54 PM
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Re: Good morning. . . good evening
I like the first - great perspective in the shot.
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26th September 2014, 06:41 PM
#6
Re: Good morning. . . good evening
I would crop the second image a fraction tighter at the bottom. There is quite a bit of greenery there which tends to distract from the 'more important' areas. And the very bottom is out of focus anyway.
Then a balancing amount from the sides, possibly just the left side?
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